18 June 2008

hmm

i wrote some hit-and-miss poetry that is located:

http://www.prose-n-poetry.com/author/463

if anyone feels like mulling over it to see if anything could be salvaged for lyrics. haha

2 comments:

Noah Maze said...

((Written 1998, age 14, as a song. Yes, I realise that it is strange and ironic that I rewrote a song entitled, 'My Only Love' and so therefore have two versions of a song proclaiming that that love is the only one. Shortly after I wrote the original 'My Only Love' I realised that the only true love I should and did have in my life was the love of God. So I rewrote the song for God. Here is the rewrite.))

Elizabeth Pax said...

are you just making fun of me or do you think i should write a song about rewriting a song to make it about god?